Sunday, February 8, 2009

neko-chan's back!

hi everyone! sorry i was gone so long! ok i didn't get any notes from storm, but i wrote a poem, will everyone give me their opinions on it? here it is: 
what are people made of?

are they flexible, maleable, like clay?

or hard, set in their shape, like stone?

is it a combination?


are they like steel?

strong, but able to change, flex

if enough pressure is applied

able to change completely with enough heat


are they like wood?

less strong than steel, but more flexible

but able to crush if there is too much pressure

and burn with too much heat


are they gold?

precious, rare

but soft, maleable

easily changed by other metals


 what about cloth?

strong when pulled, made of different fibers

twisted and woven together for strength

able to change shape but still retain its identity


do people change with age?

like grapes, vibrant and sweet in their youth

but with enough time allowed

change to wine


depending on their conditions

is people’s material different?


does it differ completely, or 

is it a different cut on the same gem?


different materials have different properties

different strengths, different flexibilities

just like people


what are you?

Thanks so much!!!

Neko-chan X3

6 comments:

Spirit said...

I don't know what I am....hmmm...

Anonymous said...

me made of funny stuff!!! where did everone go anyways????

Cruz said...

cool poem... really makes me think OW! dang it now my head hurts! j/k lol... but it really was a nice poem and it really did made me think *hugs*

Unknown said...

GAH POEM

MINE ALL MINE MINE MINE

MUST PRINT AND SAVE

of course you will be given credit...i love it MINE

Anonymous said...

woot awesomeness!!!

hat will you do with the printed-and-saved poem, echo?

Spirit said...

She will add it to her collection...She has an obsession...the whole coven pretty much does...Then she will keep it and read it...a lot I HAVE SUGAR!!!!! FEAR MEEEEE!!!!