Monday, September 22, 2008

wheeeeeee (sorry i took your title ray)

Thank you for your comments on my poem. *sniff* you guys are great! *hugs* 
brownies for everyone! except sonar. cause HE WON'T LEND ME ONE FRIKIN BOOK! so mean. thanks balmung, your comment made me feel special. *hugs again* what other mangas do you read? i like basically everything, but my faves have to be Fruits Basket, Prince of Tennis, FMA, Chronicles of a Fallen Vampire, Skip Beat, and a little one on onemanga called 'Dear School Gang Leader'. oh, do you know where i can find 'Girl Got Game'? I heard its really good, so i've been looking EVERYWHERE for it, but its always either stopped or not there! grr. ok venting DONE! 'nother poem! that's kinda like a really obvious riddle!

animals we are, yet fair of form

to attract our prey, beauty is the norm

yet we are beasts, with no hope in sight

we are predators of the night

our visages, pale as moon

are fading, gone all too soon


shunned to shadows, banned from light

yet mortals crave our icy bite

seeking to share our exquisite pain

yet all their efforts die in vain

for our burden is for us alone

young as life, old as stone


crimson mist is flowing fast

growing, hiding all the past

we alone remain unchanged

for us, the future is unarranged

to us, there exist no laws

for we are the crimson mist’s only cause


oh shining moon, take us away

for our sins we daily pay

condemmed as evil, worshipped as god

towards eternal future we endlessly plod

shackled by torment, we cause only strife

we live out a play, an act of life

as varied as you, yet condemned

as the source from which all troubles stemmed


perhaps that is true, but why

is there no grief, no sorrow in your eye

oh god forbid if he is real

these feelings that i think i feel

i fear this, that this it true

i think that i have love for you


oh run away, away you must!

our eyes’ color betrays our lust!


It kinda reminds me of 'Twilight', you know, for Edward.

I HATE YOU SONAR!!!!!!!!!!

1 comment:

Spirit said...

LOVE IT! And its ok that you took the title!